The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at rhree health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The table shows how patients

are evaluated

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have evaluated

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their

health

service

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a service

the service

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centre

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centres

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differents

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different

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service

centers

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centres

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. I will explain in detail in the

folllowing

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following

paragraphs.

Firstly

, there are three

health

service

centre

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centres

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namely

longston

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peveril

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and marchbank

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marchbank

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march bank

centres. They provide

different

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a different

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aspect of services and they are booking appointments. doctor's

service

, care of children, pharmacy,

response

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and response

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to concerns respectively.Here 1 denotes very poor

health

and 10 denotes excellent

health

paients

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patients

have

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apply

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. In

Peveril

centre

booking appointments are more

that is

9.1%

whereas

marchbank

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march bank

centre

has 7.8% and

longston

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Langston

Longton

centre

has 5.2 % .Response to concerns

are in

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less in

Longston

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Langston

centre

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that is

4.3% which is

least

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the least

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compared other two. In care of children Marchbank

centre

stands second and

longton

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centre

is 6.3%. In

pharmacy

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pharmacy,

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the

sevice

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service

is good in all three centres. Doctor's

service

is good in

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the peveril

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peveril

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centre

. The

overall

serives

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services

are good in

peveril

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centre

which is 8.3%

whereas

other

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others

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are less 7.2% and 5.8% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words health, service, centre, peveril with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "denotes" was used 2 times.

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4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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2 paragraphs

157 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at rhree health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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