The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at rhree health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The table shows how patients

are evaluated

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have evaluated

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their

health

service

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a service

the service

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centre

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centres

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differents

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different

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service

centers

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centres

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. I will explain in detail in the

folllowing

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following

paragraphs.

Firstly

, there are three

health

service

centre

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centres

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namely

longston

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peveril

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and marchbank

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marchbank

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march bank

centres. They provide

different

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aspect of services and they are booking appointments. doctor's

service

, care of children, pharmacy,

response

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to concerns respectively.Here 1 denotes very poor

health

and 10 denotes excellent

health

paients

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patients

have

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. In

Peveril

centre

booking appointments are more

that is

9.1%

whereas

marchbank

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march bank

centre

has 7.8% and

longston

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Langston

Longton

centre

has 5.2 % .Response to concerns

are in

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less in

Longston

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Langston

centre

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that is

4.3% which is

least

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compared other two. In care of children Marchbank

centre

stands second and

longton

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centre

is 6.3%. In

pharmacy

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pharmacy,

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the

sevice

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service

is good in all three centres. Doctor's

service

is good in

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the peveril

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peveril

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centre

. The

overall

serives

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services

are good in

peveril

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centre

which is 8.3%

whereas

other

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others

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are less 7.2% and 5.8% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words health, service, centre, peveril with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "denotes" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

157 words

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The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at rhree health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more? You should write at least 250 words.

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Today many people frequently change their jobs. What problems does it create? How to solve them?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?