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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information
how
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on how
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 to make
of
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apply
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milk
ever
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every
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 year in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 , Australia , Tanzania and Guatemala
in
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for
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 two
decade
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decades
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Overall
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, the table demonstrates how many
liters
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litres
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 production annually over twenty years from 1990 to 2010.
It is clear that
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 the top number was in
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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 in the year 2000
in contrast
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the
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to the
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lowes
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lowest
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 rate made by Guatemala during 2000. Generally speaking, in 1990 when
compared
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comparing
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 the number of milke between
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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 and Australia we can see there was a similarity
of
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between
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 them
however
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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was
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had
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 higher production
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then
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than
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 Australia
in addition
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 in
1990s
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the 1990s
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 the lower rate was Guatemala
it
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apply
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was
that
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apply
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26,000 liters. In 2000, the higher numbers
was
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were
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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then
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 the rate was lower in each three countries.
On the other hand
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 in 2010,
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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of
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apply
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production milke was 11,466,000
liters
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litres
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words netherland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annually
  • production
  • trends
  • increased
  • decreased
  • significantly
  • comparatively
  • figures
  • ranking
  • summarize
  • observations
  • patterns
  • consistently
  • growth
  • decline
  • noticeable
  • highlight
  • emphasize
  • yearly
  • countries
  • data
  • support
  • insights
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