You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table gives information
how
to make Change preposition
on how
of
milk Change preposition
apply
ever
year in Correct your spelling
every
Netherlands
, Australia , Tanzania and Guatemala Correct article usage
the Netherlands
in
two Change preposition
for
decade
.
Change to a plural noun
decades
Overall
, the table demonstrates how many liters
production annually over twenty years from 1990 to 2010. Change the spelling
litres
It is clear that
the top number was in Netherland
in the year 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
in contrast
the
Change preposition
to the
lowes
rate made by Guatemala during 2000.
Generally speaking, in 1990 when Correct your spelling
lowest
compared
the number of milke between Wrong verb form
comparing
Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
and Australia we can see there was a similarity Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
of
them Change preposition
between
however
Netherland
Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
was
higher production Verb problem
had
then
Australia Correct your spelling
than
in addition
in 1990s
the lower rate was Guatemala Change the article
the 1990s
it
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
26,000 liters.
In 2000, the higher numbers Correct word choice
apply
was
Change the verb form
were
Netherland
Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
then
the rate was lower in each three countries.
On the other hand
in 2010, Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
of
production milke was 11,466,000 Change preposition
apply
liters
.Change the spelling
litres
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words netherland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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