The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
The table provides data for eight different ways of
traveling
in England in 1985 and 2000.
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travelling
First,
people walked and bicycled less in 2000 compare
to 1985, as Wrong verb form
compared
distance
in Correct article usage
the distance
miles
per person reduced from 255 miles
to 237 miles
and from 51 miles
to 41 miles
respectively.
Second,
distance
in miles
in all motor vechicle
modes of Correct your spelling
vehicle
transports
increased from 1985 compared to 2000, with Fix the agreement mistake
transport
Correct article usage
the exeption
exeption
of Correct your spelling
exception
local
bus option, which decreased from 429 Correct article usage
the local
miles
to 274 . Interesting
, Change the word
Interestingly
that
the usage of Correct word choice
apply
taxi
, Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
although
tripled in showing years, remained only
1% Change preposition
at only
compare
the the most common way of travelling - Wrong verb form
compared
cars
. In addition
, the long
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long-distance
distance
bus became more popular as well, more than doubled from 1985 to 2000, from 54 miles
to 124 miles
.
Finally
, the most used mode of transportation were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
cars
. An
average Correct article usage
The
distance
in miles
per peron
who Correct your spelling
person
drived
the Correct your spelling
drove
cars
accounted for 3199 miles
and 4806 miles
in 1985 and 2000 respectively.
Overall
, during the showen
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show
15-years
period of time, people Correct your spelling
15-year
traveled
more, and they used more Change the spelling
travelled
cars
and other motore
Correct your spelling
motor
vechiles
way of transportation, Correct your spelling
vehicles
however
, less walked or cicycled
and less used the local buses.Correct your spelling
cycled
bicycled
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