You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: -Say that you liked their photos of your family -Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event -Give them the details of the event.
Dear Agus,
I'm writing
this
letter to you regarding my family photos'
that you had taken and asking if you could become my family photographer for the next event.
First of all, we really love the photos that you Change noun form
photos
have
captured a few weeks ago at my younger Unnecessary verb
apply
sister
graduation. All of the components that Change noun form
sister's
supposed
to be in a photo are all there and really balanced. Your Add a missing verb
are supposed
photography
very suitable Add a verb
photography is
photography was
with
our Change preposition
for
family
liking.
Next month, my grandfather and grandmother will celebrate their 50th wedding anniversary and our family Change noun form
family's
agree
to use your professional service if you are okay with that. We would be very grateful if you could become our photographer for my Correct subject-verb agreement
agrees
grandparents
golden wedding anniversary.
The anniversary event will be held at 06:00pm, June Change to a genitive case
grandparent's
grandparents'
31th
2024 in Grand Mediterania Hotel. Later, I will inform you Change the ending
31st
the
Change preposition
of the
accomodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
detail
if you let us use your professional service.
I'm looking forward Fix the agreement mistake
details
for
your response.
SumitroChange preposition
to
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task achievement
Correct minor grammatical errors (e.g., 'each component that should be in a photo was there and balanced') to enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
Improve logical flow between paragraphs by using transitional phrases (e.g., 'Moreover,' to connect appreciation of current work to the proposal for the next event).
task achievement
You clearly express your appreciation for the photographer's previous work, which sets a positive tone.
coherence cohesion
The letter is organized into distinct sections, making it easy to follow.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,