The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The image demonstrates information related to the way clean
water
is created by using the energy of the sun. Overall
this
is a complicated process commencing with absorbing sunlight by solar panels and culminates with movably drinkable containers of freshwater. Additionally
, this
complex process involves five steps.
The procedure begins with several solar panels which are used to accumulate sunlight energy, these panels are linked with the converters in order to transfer light power. In the second step, the mentioned machines convert solar power to electricity. Next,
the electricity is going to be used to operate the pumps, therefore
, in an underground well, water
is pumped into other spaces.
The procedure continues with water
transported to the water
tanks lying on a wooden platform. The water
is treated in this
stage to be cleaner after moving into other containers that can be moved to serve consumers.Submitted by [email protected] on
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