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The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
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The line graph compares the
number
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 of pupils from 3 countries ( US,UK,Australia) , who
educated
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were educated
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 in different countries over a
period
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 of 5 years from 2002 to 2007.
It is clear that
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 the US has by far the highest
number
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 of international
students
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 over the
period
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 shown .
while
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 ,
Australian
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Australia
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experinced
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experienced
experience
 the lowest
number
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 of
students
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 ,
who
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whom
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they
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apply
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studied in other countries. In
further
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 detail,
the
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in the
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period
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 from 2002 to 2004 the US saw
markedly
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a markedly
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decrese
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decrease
decreased
,
whereas
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Austrlia
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Australia
 and the UK remained steady
as
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at
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 30000 and 10000 respectively. moving into the
period
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 between 2004 to 2007 , we can notice a rise
of
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in
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number
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a number
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 of American
students
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 and
Biritish
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British
students
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 saw a
considerably
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 decrease.
Austrlia
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Australia
 remained relatively stable over the
period
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 shown at 10000
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, period, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • comparison
  • notable
  • peaks
  • drops
  • pattern
  • outlier
  • data
  • potential reasons
  • increase
  • decrease
  • speculate
  • long-term trends
  • provided information
  • analyze
  • overall
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