You’re visiting a town where you once worked. Write to a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: Tell your friend about your life now Give him/her details of your visit Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Agus,
I'
m
writing this
letter to let you know that I will be visiting Lampung
next week.
Currently
I'Add a comma
Currently,
m
studying in the final semester and I'm
writing my final assessment as one of the requirement
for the law bachelor degree, I am Change to a plural noun
requirements
also
having internship
in one of the biggest law Add an article
an internship
firm
in Jakarta. I Change to a plural noun
firms
learns
a lot there.
As I said earlier, I will visit Change the verb form
learn
Lampung
next week because I need to gather some datas
from Correct your spelling
data
Lampung
District Court as data for my assessment's
and Change noun form
assessment
also
I will be interviewing some judges, attorneys and prosecutors to support my arguments for my papers.
I'm
planning to stay there about
3 days, but since I will be interviewing a few people, it may take about 1-2 days from the day I started Change preposition
for about
visit
Wrong verb form
visiting
Lampung
. I heard there are a few new cafe
, if you are available, we can meet and try some Change to a plural noun
cafes
cafe
Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
at
my free time. I would be very grateful if you could accompany me when I'Change preposition
in
m
in Lampung
.
I'm
looking forward to your response
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that you separate distinct ideas into separate paragraphs. For instance, your current life and the details of your visit should be in different paragraphs to enhance readability.
task achievement
Double-check for minor grammatical errors or awkward phrasing, such as 'I learns a lot there' which should be 'I am learning a lot there'. This will improve the overall clarity and professionalism of your letter.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task clearly and provides detailed information about the writer's current life, the visit, and potential plans to meet.
task achievement
The tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend, which makes the letter more engaging and effective.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a polite and clear closing which enhances its overall coherence and cohesion.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,