in many coutries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspaper. What are the reasons for this? what could be done to this problem?
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waste
materials like plastic and paper is still not a priority in most countries. Use synonyms
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waste
material and how to encourage Use synonyms
people
to do it.
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people
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habit, ranging from internal to external factors. Linking Words
First,
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people
are still unaware of the impact and or the benefit of recycling their Use synonyms
waste
material. Use synonyms
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, they’re not yet educated enough on how to do it. Linking Words
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there are still few available facilities that would drive Linking Words
people
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waste
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instead
mix them up together. These Linking Words
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the
low number of Correct article usage
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people
who are willing to do it, yet we should start to address Use synonyms
this
problem immediately to protect our earth.
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this
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approaches that can be done. Correct article usage
a few
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people
should do it and a tutorial on doing it. Use synonyms
This
can be done in the smallest organization in Linking Words
which
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also
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people
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To conclude
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due to
the lack of awareness and the lack of supporting facilities that Linking Words
prevents
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prevent
people
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Hence
It's important to Linking Words
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continue
educate the community on the importance of Add the particle
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this
action and to provide a facility to accelerate it. I believe that if these solutions are implemented we could save our earthLinking Words
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You can provide more specific examples or case studies to make your argument stronger. For example, mention a country or city that has succeeded in promoting recycling and what measures they took.
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