The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the number of six
fuel
consumed by Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
Amercian
individuals from 1980 to 2030.
Correct your spelling
American
Overall
, petrol and oil are the primary energy source
over the 50 years, Fix the agreement mistake
sources
while
the consumption of hydropower are
the lowest. Change the verb form
is
Meawhile
, all of these six energy see an upward trend from 1980 to 2030.
As is shown in the chart, 35 quadrillion units of petrol and oil Correct your spelling
Meanwhile
was
consumed for generating energy in 1980, Change the verb form
were
while
after experiencing a steady increase, that figure is expected to rise to 50 in 2030. Additionally
, there is a slight difference between coal and natural gas
. To be specific, the usage of coal started from 16 which was lower than natural gas
(20), but overtaking natural gas
three times in 1990, 2006 and 2015, finally
reach to
30 in 2030. Wrong verb form
reaching
However
, that figure for natural gas
is predicted to remain a
same Change preposition
at a
leve
at 25 from 2015 to 2030.
Correct your spelling
level
Moreover
, the consumption of renewable sources including nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
obvious
lower than the others. Change the adjective
obviously
Although
all of the three categories get increased during that period of time, they are all below 10 quadrillion units.Submitted by 1356388645 on
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