The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the rate of people's inability to read or write. The chart compares 6 different regions and genders (male and female). Unit is measured in percentage.
In general, South
Asia
has the most population having difficulties in reading or writing. Use synonyms
In addition
, women have a higher Linking Words
illiteracy
rate compared to male across all regions given.
The highest rate of Use synonyms
illiteracy
by gender is owned by South Use synonyms
Asia
for both males and females. Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
,
developed countries have the least illiterate populations.
There are more than half of women in South Remove the comma
apply
Asia
and Arab States are unable to read or write, Use synonyms
while
men only account for more or less 30% in these regions. Linking Words
However
, Sub-Saharan Africa's ladies (~47%) are less Linking Words
illiteracy
compared to Arab States (~52%), Use synonyms
in contrast
with the higher portion of male Linking Words
illiteracy
(~31%) rather than Arab Use synonyms
State's
gents (~29%). Change noun form
State
Furthermore
, men in developed countries and East Linking Words
Asia
are very well aware of literacy, as the chart shows less than 10% of men are unaware of reading or writing.Use synonyms
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