The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
price
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the price
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changes of houses in five different locations in the world from 1990 to 2002 and compares them to the average house
prices
in 1989.
First,
the
prices
rose in all the countries excluding Frankfurt. At the beginning of the period, from 1990 to 1995, the housing
prices
in New York and London were -5% and -7% respectively,
however
, in the next six years they became positive, and accounted for 5% and 12% respectively.
Secondly
, Madrid and Frankfurt were countries, where the price level was positive during the all period. Compared between 1990-1995 and 1996-2002, in Spain the housing
prices
doubled,
however
in Germany halved.
Finally
, average price changes in Tokyo were negative from 1990 until 2002,
although
from -7.5 in the first five years they increased to -5%, and they still remained the only negative figures among the locations shown in the chart.
Overall
, compared with the average house
prices
in 1989, during the twelve-year period from 1990 to 2002, in almost all the cities housing became more expensive, excluding Germany, where the
prices
decreased, and only in Japan the percentage remained negative.
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