The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the way in which geothermal power is used to manufacture electricity.
Overall
, five main stages are shown on the diagram, beginning with gathering the cold water
, which is then
pumped down and injected into the geothermal zone; and finally
operating the turbine and producing electricity.
At the beginning of the process, cold water
is collected and placed in a container, and then
this
water
is pumped down in
a tube Change preposition
into
that is
4.5 km long. Moving to the injection well, it is put through a geothermal zone, also
known as hot rocks, that makes cold water
turn into hot water
.
At the third stage of the process, hot water
is pumped up and goes into the condenser. After steaming hot water
in a condenser, this
heated steam is used as power to drive a turbine system. At the fifth step of the process, the energy from turbine
Correct article usage
the turbine
driving
powers the generator and generates electricity.Replace the word
drives
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