a magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most" write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam, I am
writting
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with regard to the article called "the book that
influeced
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influenced
me most" that you wanted to include contributions from readers in 5th issue of your magazine. The most impressive book that I
had
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read was "The Green House" which was about a group of
animals
which live
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a farm.
This
book helps me to be familiar with living in a group and its advantages and disadvantages. To explain more,
This
story was about different
animals
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at
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the farm. The farmer used to kill one of the
animals
on a regular basis. Each of them
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better than
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and it was not killed at all.
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not any movements in that society against
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.
Finally
, all of the
animals
were killed by the farmer. In my idea, it would be likely to influence other audiences of your magazine. Owing to encouraging people to
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team work
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activities and being supportive, I would be very
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. I look forward to
recieving
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receiving
a response based on my ideas. Yours faithfully, Mahshid Ka
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task achievement
Provide more specific examples of how the book influenced you personally to enhance the completeness of the response.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases more effectively to improve the logical structure of your letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter has an appropriate greeting and closing, creating a professional tone.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph presents a single idea, making the letter clear and easy to follow.
task achievement
The writing tone is generally suitable for addressing an editor, being polite and formal.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influenced
  • contributions
  • readers
  • 'The Alchemist'
  • Paulo Coelho
  • embarks
  • journey
  • personal legend
  • valuable
  • life lessons
  • inspiring
  • pursue
  • themes
  • following one's heart
  • seeking adventure
  • embracing the unknown
  • resonate
  • wide range
  • potential
  • inspire
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