The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
The diagram illustrates the amount of materials moved in the United Kingdom during the
28 years
period from nineteen seventy four by various kinds of carriage. I will analyze the information and Correct your spelling
28-year
than
examine two important aspects for planning in the future.
Let us consider the data in three ways. Replace the word
then
First
the lowest method of transport is Add a comma
First,
pipeline
for material Add an article
a pipeline
the pipeline
such
as liquid, whereas
the highest is by highway
. Add an article
the highway
a highway
Secondly
, towards the end of the time span
the amounts through the pipeline remain stable, in contrast
to the other three which are increasing. For the last
use vehicle as a cars
is better than those three by the reason of cars are most consume in four types of carriage.
We can make Correct the article-noun agreement
car
prediction
in two thousand and two in relation to decisions about which sort of transport will be available in the future. In order of capacity, the road network is the top choice.
Add an article
a prediction
Last
choice would be Change the article
The last
boat
in view of Add an article
a boat
speed
and time to travel from one place to another. In my Correct article usage
the speed
opinion
I rather Add a comma
opinion,
to
take Remove the marker
apply
Correct article usage
a cars
cars
or Fix the agreement mistake
car
Correct article usage
a train
train
it would be Correct subject-verb agreement
trains
more
faster than a ship Change the word
apply
to
transport.Fix the infinitive
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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