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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport
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The diagram illustrates the amount of materials moved in the United Kingdom during the
28 years
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28-year
 period from nineteen seventy four by various kinds of carriage. I will analyze the information and
than
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then
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 examine two important aspects for planning in the future. Let us consider the data in three ways.
First
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 the lowest method of transport is
pipeline
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a pipeline
the pipeline
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 for material
such
 as liquid,
whereas
 the highest is by
highway
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the highway
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.
Secondly
, towards the end of the time span the amounts through the pipeline remain stable,
in contrast
 to the other three which are increasing. For the
last
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cars
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 is better than those three by the reason of cars are most consume in four types of carriage. We can make
prediction
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a prediction
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 in two thousand and two in relation to decisions about which sort of transport will be available in the future. In order of capacity, the road network is the top choice.
Last
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 choice would be
boat
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a boat
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 in view of
speed
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the speed
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 and time to travel from one place to another. In my
opinion
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opinion,
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 I rather
to
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apply
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take
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a cars
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cars
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car
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 or
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a train
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train
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trains
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 it would be
more
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apply
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faster than a ship
to
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apply
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transport.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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