Population in cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects of it? What solutions can you give to maintain a good quality of life in urban areas?

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is growing rapidly, as seen by the increased

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population in

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metropolitan

cities

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. The mobilization of

human

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humans

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into

cities

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are

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mainly driven by economic growth. Job

opportunity

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opportunities

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and accessible facilities are some of the main reasons

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why people

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to the

cities

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. Indeed, there are positive and negative impacts regarding

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issue. For

privilleged

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privileged

groups,

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as those who are equipped with proper education or skills, and sufficient capital, the chance to survive in the

cities

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will be more likely. They will earn more profits, and improve their life quality.

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, for those without any higher education or insufficient money, moving to the

cities

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will be risky. The burden could impact not only

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their well-being,

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as physical or mental health, but it will

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cause an indirect effect to the city itself,

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impact to the environmental health

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highly

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density of population.

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the problem seems to be in the human population, the solution should actually

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from the government. They should improve the basic facilities,

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as road infrastructure to provide accessible logistic distributions for economic growth.

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, education and health infrastructures should

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be prioritized.

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, the

accessible

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of

capitals

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capital

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for the local community to grow their business must

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be provided. To summarize, people are moving to the

cities

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for seeking

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to seek

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better

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life quality, and the government should be responsible for providing

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equal opportunities for the local community in urban areas by providing

accessibe

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accessible

facilities.