The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart displays population differences between Yemen and Italy in 2000 and
the
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their probability in 2050 In general, both
country
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experienced big changes in all of the ranges.
Yemen
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Yemen's
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population of youngsters
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one
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while
Italy lost only
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portion of it. But it is a completely different case for
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the middle
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range, Yemen
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