The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The pie chart displays population differences between Yemen and Italy in 2000 and

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their probability in 2050 In general, both

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experienced big changes in all of the ranges.

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population of youngsters

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range, Yemen

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The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is upload to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The only reason why people work hard is to eanr money and there is no another reason for doing so. To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? How to change their views？

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?