Writing Task 1 The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men & women per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Diagram illustrates
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
hours
worked by citizen
of Australia per week in 2007.
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
Overall
, a
people Correct article usage
apply
of
working in Australia with Change preposition
apply
a working
Correct the article-noun agreement
working hours
a working hour
hours
about 30-50 is fully dominant if we compares
with others Change the verb form
compare
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
hours
worked.
As an Information, a men
with working Correct the article-noun agreement
man
hours
about 0-10 hours
was a little numbers
that a men with working Correct the article-noun agreement
number
hours
10-20 above. In addition
, a women
with Correct the article-noun agreement
woman
a working
Correct the article-noun agreement
working hours
a working hour
hours
over 80 hours
has a lower percentage than a woman who have
a Change the verb form
has
works
number below Change the noun form
work
than
80 Change preposition
apply
hours
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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