The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of five different exported product values in one country between 2015 and 2016. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in billions.
Overall
, it is clear that
oil and mechanic products
can make money more than others while
textiles and produce stay in last
place. Moreover
, the prices of goods
increase in the second year of record except the jewellery.
To begin
with, looking at the year 2015, the value of petroleum products
occupied a gigantic 60 followed by engineered goods
with roughly 57. Gems, crops and textiles registered 42, 30 and 27 respectively. What is interesting to note is that the oil products
were more than the gems by 2 times.
On the other hand
, the price of petroleum in 2016 slightly shot up to an enormous 62 whilst engineered machines noticeably rose to almost the same level as in
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the
oil Correct article usage
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goods
. Both agricultural and fabric products
escalated to the same level which was well over 30. Besides
, a moderate drop was seen in jewellery, which was around 3. What is surprising to see is that the difference between engineered goods
and textiles was approximately 2 times.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, goods with synonyms.
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