The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates Garlsdon
town
, where a new supermarket is planned to be built. There are
two
potential places for the supermarket to be allocated. Garlsdon is the biggest of the towns on the map, with a
town
centre
with no traffic zone, housing,
two
industrial zones and surrounded by countryside. There are three main roads that come from its
centre
to the three smaller towns: Cransdon to the southeast, Bransdon to the southwest and Hindpn.
In addition
, there is a railway that crosses the
town
from southeast to the northwest through the
town
centre
area. The first
option
for the supermarket is in the countryside area, northeast
to
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the
town
, just between the main road to the Hindon and the railway. The second
option
is in the
town
centre
, near the railway, approximately in the middle of the area.
Overall
,
option
one is located in the countryside, and looks less convenient to arrive,
while
option
two
is in the middle of the map and looks closer for people to arrive,
however
,
option
two
has limitations in transport access,
due to
traffic zone,
although
both options
has
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access to the train.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, two, centre, option with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • transportation infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • environmental impact
  • green space preservation
  • noise pollution
  • local wildlife
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • boost to local businesses
  • property values
  • competitive landscape
  • consumer choice
  • community feedback
  • stakeholders
  • support
  • opposition
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