The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates Garlsdon
town
, where a new supermarket is planned to be built. There are Use synonyms
two
potential places for the supermarket to be allocated.
Garlsdon is the biggest of the towns on the map, with a Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
with no traffic zone, housing, Use synonyms
two
industrial zones and surrounded by countryside. There are three main roads that come from its Use synonyms
centre
to the three smaller towns: Cransdon to the southeast, Bransdon to the southwest and Hindpn. Use synonyms
In addition
, there is a railway that crosses the Linking Words
town
from southeast to the northwest through the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
area.
The first Use synonyms
option
for the supermarket is in the countryside area, northeast Use synonyms
to
the Change preposition
of
town
, just between the main road to the Hindon and the railway. The second Use synonyms
option
is in the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
, near the railway, approximately in the middle of the area.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
option
one is located in the countryside, and looks less convenient to arrive, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
option
Use synonyms
two
is in the middle of the map and looks closer for people to arrive, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
option
Use synonyms
two
has limitations in transport access, Use synonyms
due to
traffic zone, Linking Words
although
both options Linking Words
has
access to the train.Change the verb form
have
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