Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some

people

claim that if they

dont

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don't

eat

meat

or fish , they are

health

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healthy

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.

Moreover

, they think it is better for

world

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the world

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also

.But my experience is different with

this

idea and I disagree

compeletly

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completely

. I will explain

this

issue and my own opinion. The majority of

people

think

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think to

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avoid of eating

meat

is beneficial for their

health

as it

reduce

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reduces

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their

cholostrol

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cholesterol

. There are many

people

that are high

weight

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in weight

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in the world that

they

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apply

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do not eat any

meat

,

such

as fish and chicken.They eat vegetarian

instead

of

meat

and they believe plants are an

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exceptionally

exceptionaly

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exceptionally

good alternative

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to

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for

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to

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meat

.

Also

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they think

this

tenchniqe

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technique

is useful for

environment

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the environment

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and

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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in the world.

Hence

, it causes animals get remain and continue their lives in a natural cycle.

As if

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animal

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animals

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vanish ,

environment

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the environment

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will

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be distrubt

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distrubt

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distribute

disrupt

as soon as possible.

Although

almost most of meats are full of fat , all of us need those because of energy and

portein

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protein

.

Aviding

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Avoiding

to eat any

meat

leads to

healthy

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health

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problems. In my experience , all

of

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apply

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food

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the food

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to illustrate ,

meat

, vegetarian and protein are essential for our body.

Last

year I decided to avoid

of

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apply

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meat

.

Therefore

after a few

times

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times,

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I got weak and I spent two weeks in the hospital.since my

portein

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protein

portion

of body.

on the other hand

, I am addicted to

meat

and it

affected

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affects

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on

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apply

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me in terms of psychology. I found every food is important and if

people

eat enough , there

is

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are

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no

any

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problems. In the

mean time

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meantime

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,

people

can burn extra fat in their bodies with exercise after eating

meat

.

To sum up

,

the

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a

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group of

people

believe

meat

causes

health's

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health

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problems but In my notion

that

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meat

is crucial like

another foods

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another food

other foods

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for

aur

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health

under conditions ,

such

as

eat

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eating

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enough

in

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at

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the

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a

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suitable time.