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The tables below provide information about the consumption and productionof potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and productionof potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.
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Demonstrated in the table are
statistic
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 for the potatoes that were consumed in four continents in the world
as well as
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 their
growing
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 in 2006. The figures in the first table were recorded in kg per person, the second were in
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tonnes
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. In general,
it is clear that
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, in
Europe
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 and North
America
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, each citizen consumed the highest weight of potatoes,
whereas
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, Asia produced the most vegetable types.
Additionally
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, South and Central
America
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, and Africa had the lowest position in both tables. Looking at the tables in
further
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 detail. These vegetable types were grown with small
million
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tonnes
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 in South & Central
America
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 (15.6), Africa (16.4) and the North of The USA (24.7). A similar trend was seen in two parts at the top of the first table with the weight that people ate,
while
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 the potatoes in North
America
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 were consumed
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57.9 kg per person and got the second rate after European countries. Moving onto the remaining statistic,
Europe
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 and Asia grew the most yams with 126.3
million
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tonnes
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 and 131.2
million
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tonnes
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 respectively.
Although
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this
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 figure for Asia was higher than in
Europe
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, the consumption of the public in
Europe
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 was up to three times compared to Asian countries with 25.8kg.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes, europe, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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