The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in 5 parts of the world in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in 5 parts of the world in 2006.
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Presented for consideration is a table detailing figures for the production and the consumption of yam in various parts in 2006 in the world.
Overall
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it can be seen that in the consumption of potatoes, the highest kilogram was in Europe
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the lowest was in Africa.
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,the production of yam which had Asia was the highest in million tonnes
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South and Central
America
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were the lowest. It can
also
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be noted that in consumption of potatoes,Europe was the highest with 96,1
kg
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per person.Next to it was North
America
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with 57,9
kg
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before looking to Asia with 25,8
kg
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and South and Central
America
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with 23,6
kg
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.
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,the lowest was Africa with 14,1
kg
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for each person. Moving to the production of potatoes,Asia was the highest with 131,2 million.Speaking North
America
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was held at 24,7 bank and Africa stood at 16,4 lot.
However
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,South and Central
America
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were the lowest with 15,6 total in 2006.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words america, kg with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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