The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in 5 parts of the world in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in 5 parts of the world in 2006.
Presented for consideration is a table detailing figures for the production and the consumption of yam in various parts in 2006 in the world.
Overall
it can be seen that in the consumption of potatoes, the highest kilogram was in Europe
while
the lowest was in Africa.
In contrast
,the production of yam which had Asia was the highest in million tonnes
while
South and Central
America
were the lowest. It can
also
be noted that in consumption of potatoes,Europe was the highest with 96,1
kg
per person.Next to it was North
America
with 57,9
kg
before looking to Asia with 25,8
kg
and South and Central
America
with 23,6
kg
.
Finally
,the lowest was Africa with 14,1
kg
for each person. Moving to the production of potatoes,Asia was the highest with 131,2 million.Speaking North
America
was held at 24,7 bank and Africa stood at 16,4 lot.
However
,South and Central
America
were the lowest with 15,6 total in 2006.

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