The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of average years of individuals and the table presents an increase in people's ages, both of them show the information for four countries.
Overall
, it is clear that
citizens in Japan live the longest while
Indonesia comes in last
place. Moreover
, the trend of an increase in life expectancy is reversed, Indonesia surpasses Japan.
To begin
with, the average years of Japanese individuals was around 82.7 followed by Korea with 79.2. The United States of America represented
at 77.2; Add a missing verb
is represented
furthermore
, what is interesting to note is that the USA was more than the Indonasians' average life span by approximately 6 years.
Additionally
, an increase in life expectancy of
Indonesia came in first place with a gigantic 14.1 whilst Korea accounted for an enormous 9.3. Change preposition
in
Besides
, Japan and the US occupied a nominal 5.1 and a minuscule 3.2 respectively. What is surprising to see is the difference between America and Korea was roughly 3 times.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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