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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the orld in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the orld in 2006.
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Contained in two table graphs is data relating the production and consumption of potatoes in 5 regions namely South and Central America, Africa, North USA,
Europe
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, and the East during 2006. Units are measured in kgs per person in the first picture and in trillion kgs in the rest diagram. In general,
Europe
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 was the area having the highest consumption,
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, Africa had the lowest number.
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, Asia produced the highest number of potatoes,
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, the South and Central USA was the smallest rate. Beginning the consumption chart,
Europe
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 consumed 96,1 kilograms per person and approximately doubled the second highest rate in the North USA which was at 57.9 kilos.
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, the lowest amount was in Africa, at 14.1 kilograms
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 South and Central America and the East were around 23-25 kilogramme per individual. Turning to the remaining statistics, Asia produced 131.2 million tons, and the second highest was
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 with 126.3 trillion kilogrammes. The lowest rate is in the South and Central US, which was nearly 15.6 million tons.

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