The bar chart below shows the sector contributions tp India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions tp India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000
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The percentage of India’s GDP is demonstrated by a bar chart. The data varies among gross domestic product for the period 1960-2000. The horizontal axis depicts years
while
the vertical one – percentages.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the trend of services increased over the years
while
the agriculture
sector
decreased respectively. The industry
sector
was stable for the whole period. In 1960, the agriculture
sector
had the highest indicator of contribution, reaching 60%.
However
, it started going down gradually over given years. From 1990 to 2000, it fell down twice and had the lowest point, having approximately 13%. The trend of services contribution showed almost the same percentage as the industry
sector
, having less than a fifth.
However
, the trend grew steadily from 1960 to 2000, reaching the same percentage as the agriculture
sector
in 1960. The industry
sector
increased gradually from 1960 to 1980, having 30% and stayed stable up to 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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