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The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the
population
 information of the highest three countries (Chain,
India
,
USA
).
It is clear that
 from the table the
USA
 nation has the significant
population
 among of these countries. According
what
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 is shown the
number of
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population
USA
represent
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represents
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 327 million and from
this
number
, 58% lived in the urban
area
 and
other
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others
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 lived in
suburbs
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the suburbs
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area
.
Moreover
, the figure of
population
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the population
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 has
been
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increased
around
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by around
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 +0.71% since 2017.
Also
, the
number
 of density people is 36 per square
kilometer
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kilometre
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 and
land
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the land
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area
 square is 9.147 million. Other hand, the numbers of people who
living
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live
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 in China and
India
 are 1.415, and 1.354 billion, respectively.
Form
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From
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 these numbers, only 58%, 32% are lived in urban
area
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areas
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.
In addition
, the density of
human
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humans
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of
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in
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 China, and
India
 are (151 and 455 per square
kilometer
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kilometre
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, respectively) and their
population
 have been raised to 0.39% and 1.11% respectively since 2017.
To sum up
, we could say the
USA
 nation has
thighest
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the highest
number of
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population
while
 the
India
 has lowest
number
 among
of
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apply
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these countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, usa, number, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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