The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams present the 4 steps of the evolution procedure of horses regarding the variation of their feet over the past 40
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every horseshoe had five forks. Compared to modern horses, the Eohippus were very small. As for their appearance, some spots can be seen on their skin. 10 Correct word choice
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The next stage was the emergence of Merychippus 15 Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, years, mesohippus, horse with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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