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The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams present the 4 steps of the evolution procedure of horses regarding the variation of their feet over the past 40
million
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years
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.
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, there are totally four time periods in the whole process, Eohippus,
Mesohippus
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, Meryvhippus and
Horse
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. The four stages were separated by 1
million
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, 1.5
million
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 and 1.5
million
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years
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 respectively. Forty
million
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years
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 ago, one of the species of horses was called Eohippus,
which
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and
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 every horseshoe had five forks. Compared to modern horses, the Eohippus were very small. As for their appearance, some spots can be seen on their skin. 10
million
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years
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 later, another type of
horse
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 called
Mesohippus
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 emerged. In
this
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 stage, the
Mesohippus
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 had a bigger body and one of the toes on their hooves was diminished into three. At the same time, the spots they originally had have
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 disappeared. The next stage was the emergence of Merychippus 15
million
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years
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 ago. Compared to the
Mesohippus
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, the Merychippus seemed taller and bigger. It can be noticed that their fur is darker and spotted. In
this
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 period, their hooves remain three-lobed.
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, in modern times, the
horse
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, as we are familiar with it, appeared. At
this
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 stage, the
horse
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 finished its development period and showed more obvious features. Houses are much stronger than the
last
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 evolution and their hooves are no longer separate, but one.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, years, mesohippus, horse with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evolution
  • prehistoric
  • size progression
  • hoof development
  • toes transformation
  • limb elongation
  • species adaptation
  • significant change
  • comparative size
  • distinct differences
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