The charts below show information on free-time activities taken by teenagers in a specific country both in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart shows the free-time activities undertaken by teenagers in a specific country between 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, it can be seen that sports accounted for the largest amount in 2009. The internet accounted for almost two-fifths of teenagers in 2019.
In detail, music has the highest proportion with 24% and sports in a very similar proportion with 21% in 2009. On the other hand
, the large number of adolescents in 2019 focuses
on free activities, almost more than Wrong verb form
focused
two fifths
parts. followed by television with 32%.
The rest of the categories had a more similar proportion in 2009, Add a hyphen
two-fifths
such
as Television with
19%, Cooking Change preposition
at
with
16% and less than a fifth of Internet and Walking. The free time activities of adolescents in 2019 Change preposition
at
also
had similar percentages such
as music at 18% and sports at 11%, a small minority in their free time did cooking and walking.Submitted by viataz33 on
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