The chart below gives about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart provides information about how households in
same
region waste their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
Change the article
the same
To sum up
, meanwhile in 1968 food
was the most money spent category from 8 categories and there were
no matching Change the verb form
was
section
that Fix the agreement mistake
sections
can
rival Wrong verb form
could
food
, in 2018 the most fund spent section changed into
Change preposition
to
leisure
and housing and food
are
right behind Wrong verb form
was
of
Change preposition
apply
leisure
.
Firstly
, The most dollar allocated
group in 1968 Add a hyphen
dollar-allocated
is
Wrong verb form
was
food
with 35% of weekly income. There were no rival
that could withstand Fix the agreement mistake
rivals
food
, and all other groups were between 10% to 6% of weekly earnings. On the contrary
, the least wasted categorization were
fuel and power with 6%.
Change the verb form
was
Secondly
, in 2018, biggest
earnings allocated class Correct article usage
the biggest
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Leisure
with 22% and after leisure
housing and food
came into the ranking just like this
numbering, with each holding 19% and 17%. After top
3, the leftover groups were between 14% to 4%.Correct article usage
the top
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, leisure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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