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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the rate of consuming fast
food
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 by American
people
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 at different times in restaurants from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
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, all trends have upward and downward movements but the majority of
people
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 ate fast
food
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 once a
week
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 in 2003 and it grew up in 2006.
While
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people
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 tried to eat fast
food
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 once or twice a month in 2013 and
this
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 was the highest amount.
To begin
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 with, under 5% of
people
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 ate fast
food
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 every day between 2003 and 2013.
Additionally
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, they never ate it as well. Most
people
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 had fast
food
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 once a
week
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 and once or twice a month. In 2006, about 34% of
people
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 ate fast
food
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 once a
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 and just more than 30% of individuals had it in 2003.
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, it can be seen that 30% of Americans consumed fast
food
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 once or twice a month in 2003.
However
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, in 2006,
this
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 rate decreased by 5% but in 2013, eating fast
food
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 increased again to around 34%. By looking into details, only 20% of American
people
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 ate fast
food
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 several times a
week
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 in 2006.
It is clear that
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 in one case 15% of individuals consumed fast
food
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 both in 2006 and 2013.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people, week with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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