The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005
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The provided line graph illustrates how much money
spent
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on
books
in four different countries
such
as Germany, France, Italy and Austria over the course of ten years, starting from 1995.
Overall
, there was an increase in the spending/expenditure on
books
in all four nations examined, with Austria witnessing the most dramatic rise.
In addition
, Germany generally had the highest figures throughout the
period
shown. In Germany, the amount of money spent on
books
at the beginning of the
period
started at 80
million
dollars
, after which it saw a gradual/steady/progressive rise to 90
million
dollars
in 1999 before reaching a peak of 95
million
dollars
6 years later.
Furthermore
, just 30
million
dollars
was invested in/spent on
books
in Austria in 1995, followed by a significant increase to just over=north of 70
million
dollars
at the end
of the
period
. In 1995, the expenditure on
books
in France was
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55
million
dollars
, with a constant rise to around 75
million
dollars
in 2015. A similar change can be seen in the figure for Italy, which increased from 50
million
dollars
to just over 60
million
dollars
toward the end of the
period
.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books, period, million, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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