The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
The given chart illustrates the data of families
spendings
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
with
their weekly earnings in a particular country in 1968 and 2018.
Change preposition
on
Overall
, food
category saw a significant reduction from 1968 to 2018. In contrarily, leisure and housing Correct article usage
the food
spendings
showed Fix the agreement mistake
spending
noticeable
increase in 2018. Add an article
a noticeable
In addition
, Correct article usage
the amounted
amounted
for household Replace the word
amount
goods
steadily
unchanged.
It can be seen Add a missing verb
was steadily
the
chart, Change preposition
from the
food
Correct word choice
that food
spendings
had the highest percentage (exactly 35%) in 1968, and significantly decreased and reached around 17% in 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Expense
Fix the agreement mistake
Expenses
of
housing and leisure were exactly 10% and just below the 10% in 1968 and increased in 2018, at just under Change preposition
for
the
20% and about 23% respectively.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, expenditure
Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
of
fuel and power, clothing and Change preposition
on
footware
, household Correct your spelling
footwear
goods
and personal goods
did not exceed neither in 1968 nor in 2018. Additionally
, it is clear that
spending on weekly income for household goods
remainly
unchanged in both years at around 7%.Correct your spelling
remained
remain
remains
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