Write a letter to arrange hotel and transfers from company.
Dear Jasmine,
My name is Victoria and I am from Chris’s team.
I am coming to
UK
on Jun 8 ( at night ), Correct article usage
the UK
next
day I work at the UK offices ( on Jul 9th ) and Correct article usage
the next
then
I flight
to Spain.
As I understand from Chris you can help me with transfers and hotel arrangements in the UK.
Pls find below my flight details and let me know if any more information is needed.
Many thanks in advance,
Best regards,
VictoriaReplace the word
fly
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task achievement
Include specific details regarding your flight details and hotel requirements to ensure clarity and completeness.
coherence cohesion
Consider reorganizing the information for better clarity, such as separating travel dates and hotel requirements into distinct paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and professional.
task achievement
The tone is appropriate for a formal request.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite