Task 1: The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph describes the development in the percentages of
who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
owns
Correct subject-verb agreement
own
cars
in one European nation from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
, there was a decrease in households
not cars
, while
the percentages
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
people
had
Correct pronoun usage
who had
cars
significantly increase
.The Wrong verb form
increased
percentage
of households
owning two
cas fluctuated from 1971 to 2001.
Speaking of, the percentage
of people
who did not have cars
fell from 50% in 1971 to almost 40% in 1981. By contrast
, there was a noticeable increase in the percentage
of people
owning two
cars
from approximately 20% to 30%. While
the amount of people
owning one car decreased slightly from 36% in 1971 to 34% in 1981.
Over the next decade, the percentage
of households
that had two
cars
increased dramatically from 21% in 1991 to approximately 31% in 2001 while
this
figure 29
% remained unchanged with the number of Change preposition
of 29
people
who did not own cars
in the past two
decades. There was a slight decrease from 50% in 1981 to 47% in 1991 with the households
having one car.Submitted by weezel on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, households, people, percentage, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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