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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the line graphs illustrate the
price
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 of bananas per kilogram in four different countries ( Japan,France,Germany,USA) over a period of 10 years .
it is clear that
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japan
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Japan
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 made up the highest
price
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of
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on
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 the graph in 1995
while
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 the
price
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 of bananas
is
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was
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 the lowest quantity in 2003. the
price
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 of bananas remained steady
from1997
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from 1997
 50
the
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in the
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 final year .
moreover
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, it is
also
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 worth mentioning that

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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