You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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the line graphs illustrate the
price
of bananas per kilogram in four different countries ( Japan,France,Germany,USA) over a period of 10 years .
Use synonyms
it is clear that
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japan
made up the highest Capitalize word
Japan
price
Use synonyms
of
the graph in 1995 Change preposition
on
while
the Linking Words
price
of bananas Use synonyms
is
the lowest quantity in 2003. the Wrong verb form
was
price
of bananas remained steady Use synonyms
from1997
50 Correct your spelling
from 1997
the
final year .
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in the
moreover
, it is Linking Words
also
worth mentioning thatLinking Words
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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