The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries, namely the USA, Sweden, and Japan.
The graph illustrates the
amount
of people aged 65 and over in the middle of 1940 and 2040 in Change the quantifier
number
USA
, Sweden and Japan.
Correct article usage
the USA
It is clear that
the population went through significient
changes throughout the years, All three countries increased dramatically in Correct your spelling
significant
number
of citizens, Change the article
a number
the number
Respectively
.
In 1940 Japan was precisely at 5%, which Fix capitalization
respectively
then
slightly decreased to approximately 3% then
stayed the same for 13 years, It had a massive resurgence to approximately 28% in 2040.
Sweden started at 7% which rose significantly to 14% in the year 1980, it had a slight decrease Correct word choice
and then
of
number Change preposition
in
then
increased massively in the year 2040.
USA
never decreased Correct article usage
The USA
of
number. Change preposition
in
However
, we can see that in the year
2000 to Fix the agreement mistake
years
2020
population was the same.Add a comma
2020,
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