The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries, namely the USA, Sweden, and Japan.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and  2040 in three different countries, namely the USA, Sweden, and Japan.
The graph illustrates the
amount
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of people aged 65 and over in the middle of 1940 and 2040 in
USA
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the USA
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, Sweden and Japan.
It is clear that
the population went through
significient
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significant
changes throughout the years, All three countries increased dramatically in
number
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a number
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of citizens,
Respectively
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. In 1940 Japan was precisely at 5%, which
then
slightly decreased to approximately 3%
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and then
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stayed the same for 13 years, It had a massive resurgence to approximately 28% in 2040. Sweden started at 7% which rose significantly to 14% in the year 1980, it had a slight decrease
of
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number
then
increased massively in the year 2040.
USA
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The USA
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never decreased
of
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number.
However
, we can see that in the
year
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years
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2000 to
2020
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2020,
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population was the same.
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