In these
days, the proliferation of globalization and the rising trend of international Change preposition
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organization
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organizations
poses
a negative effect Correct subject-verb agreement
pose
to
the Change preposition
on
environment
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a section of society strongly advocates Remove the comma
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this
, others Linking Words
are oppose
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are opposed
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, I completely agree with the statement as Linking Words
this
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environment
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environmental
pollution
and deforestation.
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globalization leads to Industrial expansions, resulting in increased Correct article usage
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pollution
and carbon emissions. The huge factories and Industrial plants release their residue into the Use synonyms
environment
and that leads to air Use synonyms
pollution
and water Use synonyms
pollution
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, the emission of toxic gases by the factories Linking Words
prone
to numerous severe diseases like breathing issues through inhaling. To cite an example, India's capital city Add a missing verb
is prone
in
Delhi has recorded Change preposition
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tremendous
amount of toxic gases in the air by the World Health Organization, Add an article
a tremendous
that
are beyond human body tolerance. Correct pronoun usage
which
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, they clearly warned Linking Words
public
to avoid Correct article usage
the public
traveling
in Change the spelling
travelling
this
city.
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Secondly
, the reproduction and supply chain practices of multinational companies contribute to Linking Words
the
deforestation and loss of biodiversity. Correct article usage
apply
In other words
,the utilization of green space by many international organizations in different countries is a veiled threat Linking Words
for
animal species and their habitats. Change preposition
to
For example
, every year thousands of trees Linking Words
are being cutting
down by the authorities in the Amazon rainforest for making paper and buildings without concerning how vital is the Amazon forest for the Change the verb form
are being cut
environment
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,
at
the verge of extinction.
In conclusion, Change preposition
on
although
industrialization and globalization Linking Words
has
countless benefits Change the verb form
have
to
society, Change preposition
for
however
, it's negative impact on the Linking Words
environment
cannot be ignored. As long as multinational companies focus on growing Use synonyms
instead
of concerning environmental problems, it will lead to more detrimental impacts.Linking Words
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