The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for suagr form sugar canes .

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manufactured from

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canes

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,it can be seen that there are 7 steps for making finished

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.Begining

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with

growing

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canes

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and ending with drying and cooling.

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with

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the first

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where

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the

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canes

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are planted .After 12-18 months , the employees will harvest them by

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or special machines.The third

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is crushing, the

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canes

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are put into the crushed machine to get

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is

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is poured

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a limestone filler to

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. Turning to the

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3 steps of

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process.After purifying,

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juice

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the juice

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will be heated by a huge evaporator,

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juice

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becomes syrup.In the following

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, the syrup of

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is inserted into a centrifuge and

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crystals are separated.

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,crystals are dried and cooled in a container,

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they become finished

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