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The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

#world #work #employees #conditions #life #people #future
In
this
 day and age, it is a common belief that Working people cannot maintain
the
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job
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jobs
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 and have to change to adapt to the world. In
this
discussion
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 I will explain the reasons for these changes and offer solutions so people can prepare for the future. On the one hand, There are many reasons for
this
 change.
Firstly
, technology is increasingly developing,
this
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which
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 leads to unemployment and difficulty maintaining their jobs.
For example
, The workforce will be replaced by machines that work faster and more efficiently.
Secondly
, Companies wishing to reduce costs may cut staff or reduce
workers
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 salaries, which will make it difficult for workers to maintain their jobs.
Moreover
, the development of technology
such
 as the
internet
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 has
also
 led to fewer jobs and fewer goods being produced.
For instance
, newspapers will no longer be popular because users tend to read online rather than read newspapers.
On the other hand
, to adapt to
this
 change, employees need to prepare well for the future.
Besides
,
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labor
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 force
need
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 to quickly adapt and be more flexible.
For example
, working with different environments, being ready to work remotely, having a flexible working environment, and keeping up with trends quickly.
Furthermore
, The government needs to take measures to prevent
this
 substitution
such
 as introducing
labor
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 and protection laws
as well as
 providing appropriate educational training programs for the people.
To sum up
, the world of work is constantly changing, so each individual needs to know how to approach to avoid being eliminated from the job they are doing.
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Try to provide more detailed and specific examples to support your points. This can help make your arguments more convincing and comprehensive.
coherence cohesion
Work on the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs. Ensure that each idea leads naturally to the next to help the reader follow your argument more easily.
coherence cohesion
Be mindful of minor grammatical errors and punctuation issues. Although these do not heavily impact your score, polishing them can make your essay more professional.
coherence cohesion
Your essay presents a clear introduction and conclusion, helping frame the discussion effectively.
task achievement
You have addressed the task well by discussing both the causes of changes in the world of work and suggesting ways to prepare for the future.
task achievement
Your ideas are clear, and you have shown a good understanding of the topic.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • artificial intelligence
  • gig economy
  • freelance
  • contract work
  • globalization
  • interconnected economy
  • work-life balance
  • market instability
  • economic fluctuations
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