The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of hired individuals which were categorized into seven job types and their gender in Australia

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year. From an

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perspective, employing clerical job type had the most

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female

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occupation had the highest

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of hiring men.

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the most popular job for

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was secretary, at

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1000,000, followed by professionals, at exactly 700000. In

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contrast,

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dropped in business and production, which equally occupied the lowest

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in work type among women, accounting for 100000. Moving on to male

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preferences, it is readily apparent that, opposite of the female

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rate tendency, men's hiring rate was notably high in business, followed by clerical at nearly 900000. In comparison, the lowest

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male

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was Labourers, which was 400000.

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male hiring was fourfold more than the female lowest

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employment

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