Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many people believe that animal experimentation should be banned because it is cruel.
On the other hand
, its importance in
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field is
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we will discuss
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practice is justified, despite its cruelty and whether there are any other alternatives.
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on
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been fundamental for
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development of human society. It has been used in many fields of science that directly improved our lives.
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trial is a
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a new drug. If a drug shows
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harmful
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animal
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such
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rats or monkeys in
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trial is not undertaken. Animal experimentation is executed in fields which are completely unknown or new to us as well.
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example of
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is Leica, the dog sent to
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outer space
by
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aerospace authority to experiment
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effects of space travel on a living body. The information gathered by
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mission paved the way
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the human exploration of space.
On the other hand
, countless innocent animals die in these processes. Preventing these
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may not be avoidable entirely,
however
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in science can help reduce
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development in the field of Artificial Intelligence is lighting the beacon of hope. With enough data, computer simulation can take
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of animal experiments in many fields.
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of different
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environments
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on a living body
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other planets,
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mars.
To conclude
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inhuman,
however
it is a justified cruelty.
However
, these animals did not choose to be in
this
place, we, the humans did. So, it is our responsibility to look for any other alternatives to avoid
this
practice.
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grammar
Work on improving grammatical accuracy, especially with subject-verb agreement and proper article usage. For example, change 'experiment on animal' to 'experiment on animals' and 'a mendatory step' to 'a mandatory step.'
spelling
Be mindful of spelling errors. Correct 'emmece' to 'immense' and 'mendatory' to 'mandatory.'
content development
Expand on some of the ideas to make them more comprehensive. For instance, provide more concrete examples of how AI can replace animal experimentation instead of just mentioning it briefly.
structure
The essay is structured well with clear sections: an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
evidence
The use of specific examples such as drug testing and the example of Laika the dog helps to illustrate points effectively.
balance view
The writer presents a balanced view, acknowledging the ethical concerns while recognizing the scientific benefits of animal testing.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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