Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Many people believe that animal experimentation should be banned because it is cruel.
On the other hand
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the scientific
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whether
this
practice is justified, despite its cruelty and whether there are any other alternatives.
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animals
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have
scientific
development of human society. It has been used in many fields of science that directly improved our lives. Add an article
the scientific
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an animal
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harmfull
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on
animal
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animals
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this
step, human
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Animal experimentation is executed in fields which are completely unknown or new to us as well. Add an article
the human
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is Leica, the dog sent to outerspace
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a Russian
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this
mission paved the way of
the human exploration of space.
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On the other hand
, countless innocent animals die in these processes. Preventing these death
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deaths
however
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To conclude
, animal experimentation is an
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however
it is a justified cruelty. However
, these animals did not choose to be in this
place, we, the humans did. So, it is our responsibility to look for any other alternatives to avoid this
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grammar
Work on improving grammatical accuracy, especially with subject-verb agreement and proper article usage. For example, change 'experiment on animal' to 'experiment on animals' and 'a mendatory step' to 'a mandatory step.'
spelling
Be mindful of spelling errors. Correct 'emmece' to 'immense' and 'mendatory' to 'mandatory.'
content development
Expand on some of the ideas to make them more comprehensive. For instance, provide more concrete examples of how AI can replace animal experimentation instead of just mentioning it briefly.
structure
The essay is structured well with clear sections: an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
evidence
The use of specific examples such as drug testing and the example of Laika the dog helps to illustrate points effectively.
balance view
The writer presents a balanced view, acknowledging the ethical concerns while recognizing the scientific benefits of animal testing.
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