The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the population size,birth estimate and
the
death number in countries Correct article usage
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such
as England and Wales from 1700 to the 2000s.(per 1000 people)
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Overall
, it can be seen from the line graph that,citizen size had a dramatic upward trend from 1700 ,Linking Words
while
at the same time the other two categories decreased.
Looking at the details, we can find out that,birth accounts and deaths had been rising from 27 million in the 1700s to about 40 in 1750. After that, there was a steady tendency in both rates until the 1800s. Linking Words
Whereas
the population increased to 100 thousand ,and declined again to the previous condition in the 1800 year.
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On the other hand
,after the 17-century population size significantly grew ,consist 50 million Linking Words
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In contrast
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this
,deaths gradually decreased to 20 bands ,but the birth rate rose again.Linking Words
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