Hi Nguyen Ngoc Kieu Phong (MT)
I have been looking for your reply for decades but you haven't replied to me, what a shitty friend.
I am not going to give you a rocket,
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, you will be
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by many of my friends
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that
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you should
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not judge a book by its cover.
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suitable writing tone
Your letter should have a more suitable tone for addressing a friend. Try to express your feelings in a more positive and constructive way.
complete response
While the letter is complete in its response, adding more details about why you value your friendship would make it more heartfelt.
logical structure
Your letter could benefit from better structure and clearer paragraphs. Consider splitting different ideas into separate paragraphs.
greeting and closing
You started the letter with an appropriate greeting, which is good for setting the tone.
suitable writing tone
You expressed your feelings honestly, which is important in a personal letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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