The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information about the
proportion
of the population in four Asian Use synonyms
countries
living in urban areas during the period from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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Overall
, the percentage of citizens in Linking Words
four
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the four
countries
saw an increase and Use synonyms
Malaysia
was the country which climbed considerably.
It is clear from the graph that in 1970, the Philippines had the highest Use synonyms
proportion
at about 31%, followed by Use synonyms
Malaysia
, and Use synonyms
Indonesia
had the lowest at about 13%. Ten years later, the percentage of all nations grew slightly, but there was a significant increase in the rate of Use synonyms
Malaysia
at 40%. In 1990, the Philippines’s figure rocketed at approximately 50%, Use synonyms
while
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Indonesia
saw a moderate rise at about 15%. After a decade, the Philippines fell to about 46%, Use synonyms
whereas
the rate of both Linking Words
Indonesia
and Thailand was the same at nearly 30%. Notably, Use synonyms
Malaysia
saw a significant growth at approximately 60%
In the next 10 years, the Philippines’s figure dropped Use synonyms
while
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Indonesia
saw a rapid climb and met the Philippines at 40%. In 2020, all Use synonyms
countries
went up, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
Malaysia
had the largest Use synonyms
proportion
with more than three-fourths. Between 2030 and 2040, the percentage of four Use synonyms
countries
is expected to increase steadily, and Thailand will rise quickly but it will be the lowest Use synonyms
proportion
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