Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Certainly,

everyone

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of us shoulders a massive responsibility towards

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health

retention.

Health

is like a crown on our head,

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of

this

, we must prioritize avoiding hazardous ingredients. Obviously,

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junk

food

and soft

drinks

are the most dangerous sources

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these detrimental components. So, have you ever been thinking

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can we solve

this

utmost problem? Reducing the white poison-which means

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our diet is by no means an easy task. So, I completely agree with raising the money

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the

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junk

food

to seek less sugar. In terms of using

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food

, we must take a close look

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the pros and the true

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of it. On the one hand, it

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you

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of diseases on a silver plate.

Firstly

; manufactured

food

is the main source for putting on weight, and the reason behind the scene is the accumulation of fats and lipids in various

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of

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.

Secondly

; diabetes starts to crosscheck the way to your body, and there is no doubt that

this

kind of

food

is the best environment for it to be created.

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but not least; by increasing the amount of

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food- which

is not handmade- you eat, the indicator for

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of

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cholesterol in your body will go up,

that is

why the relationship between cholesterol in our blood vessels and eating

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outdoors

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food

is directly proportional. We must take a serious step to get the solution of sugar reduction from our

food

. It is preferable that the money costs of

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junk

food

would not be cheap at all, absolutely, it is an immense step towards a well-being body, physical, and mental

health

.

On the other hand

, soft

drinks

are another source of poison flow in our physique. The danger resulting from getting fizzy

drinks

is represented by osteoporosis.

In addition

to osteoporosis,

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diabetes

as a result

of drinkable

products

is highly ranked by many scientists. In regards to

drinks

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hazards, we cannot ignore its effective role in destroying the inner wall of the stomach.

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, their direct contact with

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may lead to

ulcer

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. Intimately ,there are many harmful causes directed by these kinds of

products

, particularly, their role in harming the skin, nails, and

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hairs

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. So generally speaking, it is advisable to prevent the drink

products

by imposing taxes on them.

In addition

to taxes, making their prices cannot be affordable may be another way of solving the problem.

To conclude

, summarize, and end up my criticism effectively,

health

is

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God's faithfulness for us, so we should put ourselves on the right track to keep it, and the first serious step on

this

track is to avoid

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manufactured

food

and drink

products

.