The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the differences between the Islip town
centre
now and in the future after development.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Islip town
centre
will undergo a significant change. Currently,
according to
the map, we can see that the
centre
is close to the countryside, school and housing and it includes
shops
, a main
road
and a park. After refurbishment,
however
, the position of the school and housing will be intact.
Besides
, the school will be bigger and the
road
will be expanded and replaced by a dual carriageway which surrounds other facilities.
Next,
the pedestrians will appear and lie at the position of the main
road
. No change will be made to the
shops
which are in the south .
In addition
, adjacent to these
shops
, there will be the appearance of many new houses but the park will be narrowed. The north of pedestrians, the countryside and the
shops
will be removed
then
a new
road
and shopping
centre
will be constructed.
Moreover
, in the west of the shopping
centre
, they will build a bus station and in the east of it, they will add a car park and new houses.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, shops, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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