Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available
Hello Mrs Barret,
I saw your advertisement in the Milan residents group on Facebook that you are looking for a helper for some household chores during the next summer. As far as I got from your note, I assume you would like someone to help you with meal preparation, especially on holidays when you may have guests.
Since I am an absolute cooking enthusiast, I can take your kitchen responsibility all by myself and prepare everything in time prior to the arrival of your visitors.
Moreover
, be informed that due to
my last
year's experience from gastronomy courses in Paris , you can rest assured that every little detail and nuance of recipes will be absolutely taken care of.
The only demand to ask you for is the working hours to be mostly before noon , but of course, I will be there the whole time whenever you have visitors. Also
please give me the foods that you may prefer in advance, so I can manage time and purchase them if you wish during my work hours.
Looking forward to hearing from you
With regards,
Narges AminSubmitted by Narges
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Coherence & Cohesion
Consider using paragraphs to separate distinct ideas, such as how you can help, why you'd like to do this work, and your availability. This will improve readability and coherence.
Task Achievement
Proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and punctuation to enhance clarity and professionalism, such as 'rest assured that every little detail and nuance of recipes will be absolutely taken care of' could be more succinctly written as 'rest assured that every detail of the recipes will be taken care of.'
Coherence & Cohesion
The letter opens with a clear greeting and closes with a polite closing remark, which is essential in maintaining a respectful tone.
Task Achievement
You conveyed a friendly and polite tone throughout the letter, which makes it engaging and suitable for the purpose.
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