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The chart below show the proportion of Vietnamese students who cheat on exams and their preferrened method of cheating in 2024

The chart below show the proportion of Vietnamese students who cheat on exams and their preferrened method of cheating in 2024
The bar
chart
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 illustrates the percentage of Vietnamese
students
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 cheating and the pie
chart
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 shows the proportion of three different cheating
method
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methods
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 in 2024
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,It can be seen that the
propotion
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proportion
 of male
students
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 cheating in all three levels of education was always higher than the figure for females.It can
also
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 be noted that cheating
students
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prefered
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preferred
 to use a sheet to cheat the most Looking at the bar
chart
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 in detail,only about 25% of male
students
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 cheated in primary school and rose slightly to more than 40% in secondary school.
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, the percentage of female
students
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cheated
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was
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started at under 10% and increased significantly to 30% in secondary school. In university, the proportion of male and female
students
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cheatinng
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cheating
 was more than 50% and
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about
abour
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about
 45%,respectively Turning to the pie
chart
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,45% of
students
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 tended to use a cheat sheet for cheating on exams.
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, the figure for peeking at a
neighbor
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 was 35%,
while
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 only 15% of
students
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 chose
bribing
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 a teacher as a method for cheating. the percentage of
students
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who prefered
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prefered
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preferred
 hacking the answer key was only 10%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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