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Writing Samples
Band 5.5

You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

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Respected sir, I hope
this
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 email finds you well.
My self
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Self
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Priynka
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Priyanka
i
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I
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 have had stayed in your hotel
last
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 weekend on
sunday
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Sunday
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,
june
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June
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 1st 2024. My room number was 302. I
have
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apply
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lost my work
diary
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 in
hotel
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the hotel
a hotel
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 as
i am
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I
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stongly
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strongly
 believe because when
i
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I
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 came back and
i
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I
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 checked my bag
i
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I
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 could not find it
enywhere
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anywhere
. I have kept
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diary
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the diary
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 under
pillow
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my pillow
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 but in
morning
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the morning
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 when
i
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I
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 was packing my clothes back
to
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into
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bag
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the bag
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 by mistake
i
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I
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 forgot to put
it
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them
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 in. That
diary
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 is really important to me because that's mainly
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what i
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i
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I
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 use for work as
i
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I
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 work in
finance
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the finance
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 department at
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an intenational
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intenational
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international
 media company i have recorded all billing amounts and my personal budgets in written
formats
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format
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 in my
diary
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. If
i
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I
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 won't be able to find it soon
then
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i
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I
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 might have to face
a
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apply
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trouble at my workplace. I
will
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would
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appriciate
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appreciate
 for your help if you
can
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could
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 help me to find it
out
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apply
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in
hotel
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a hotel
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 room. For your
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convenience
convinience
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convinience,
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 you can courier that package to my home address which is
same
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the same
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in
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as
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 my ID card which
i
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I
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 have submitted at
reception
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the reception
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 desk. I am ready to pay the
preferable
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preferred
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 charges to you directly once
i
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I
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 receive the package. I will
higly
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highly
appriciate
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appreciate
appreciated
 for your help. Hope to hear from you soon. Thank you, Yours Faithfully, Priyanka

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suitable writing tone
It's essential to maintain a formal tone throughout the letter, considering it is to a hotel manager. Starting with 'Myself Priyanka' can be improved to 'My name is Priyanka.'
single idea per paragraph
A clearer separation of ideas into paragraphs would enhance readability. Each paragraph should focus on a single point – your stay, the importance of the diary, and how to send it back.
logical structure
There are some spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'enywhere' instead of 'anywhere,' 'appreciate' instead of 'appriciate,' and 'intenational' instead of 'international.' Proofreading your letter before sending it can help eliminate these mistakes.
complete response
You provided all necessary details about your stay, the lost item, and your contact information, which gives a complete response to the task.
suitable writing tone
Your letter maintains a polite and respectful tone, which is suitable for a formal letter to a hotel manager.
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