The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante
The diagram
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us the transformation of geothermal
energy
into electrical
energy
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, there are five phases and
this
occurs in two different places: Under the ground and
plant
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production.
Firstly
, water
in
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low
temperature
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is pumped into the ground to a thin and long way about 4.5 km. After that,
starts
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the stage 2,
and
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the cold water is injected
in
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high pressure
to
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a geothermal zone, where they has been your temperature
changed
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in contact
of
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the extremely hot rock and
it
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is pumped again to the surface. It is the final step for
process
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at
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the underground called
production
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zone. The
last
block combines two parts,
stage
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4 and 5 when the hot water is condensed and
this
hermetic system
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pression
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pressure
and the turbine is moved with
this
power.
This
movement turns together the electric generator where the mechanical
energy
is converted
in
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electrical
energy
and it is transported to the power lines.
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